Talk:Zuhause im Glück – Unser Einzug in ein neues Leben

Latest comment: 10 years ago by SarahTheEntwife in topic Editing notes

Editing notes

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Added note on citations, wikilinks. Translation needs some editing to make things flow better; some phrasing is odd. The "success" section in particular needs citations and/or to be removed completely as it's written in a sales-pitch sort of way. SarahTheEntwife (talk) 02:28, 7 December 2013 (UTC)Reply