Talk:Yema stabbings

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Cameron Dewe in topic Article focus and development

Article focus and development

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Back in 2016 Cyanidethistles moved this article from the page titled Yang Qingpei to Yema stabbings, making the comment that the article should focus on the incident and not on the attacker. I concur. The lead section needs to be modified to start by explaining what the stabbings are about and that they were perpetrated by Yang Qingpei, rather than explaining who the perpetrator is, first. Biographies of the perpetrator and the victims can then be given and the crime explained in detail. The information is already present in the article, it just needs to be reorganized and changed in focus. - Cameron Dewe (talk) 12:10, 27 April 2021 (UTC)Reply