Talk:Yamishibai: Japanese Ghost Stories

Quick assessments

Don't feel obligated to take these suggestions.

• The production section is just listing the staff. The full list could be argued as trivia or name checking non-notable individuals. I would remove the section and list the top main staff in prose form in the release.
• "The first season of Yamishibai: Japanese Ghost Stories uses one piece of theme music: an ending theme." That sentence would be good if there were multiple themes.
• I would say the music section lacks focus. The album isn't a large part to the series, as only a single song was used. The image should be removed since it won't satisfy NFC.
• Media section is too short for subsections. Consider merging the content into a paragraph. Also, for accuracy, consider renaming Media to Adapted/Related media or something like that.
• You should remove the Hiragana used to help pronounce the Japanese titles. You can also link to sections to make it easier for people to ref check the episode sources. first episode

DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 04:49, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Thanks DragonZero! I'll take those suggestions and put them to use. —KirtZ^Mail 11:51, 21 April 2014 (UTC)