POV article edit

This article's text is largely a plagiarism of the company's presentation text, and most likely edited/created by the owner Kent Gillström himself. The article has been deleted a number of times on Swedish Wikipedia.

question edit

Dear Wikipedia So if I rewrite the text about this landmark in swedish music, would it then be accepted? Gordon Cyrus 19:34, 6 March 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gordoncyrus (talkcontribs)

rewriting edit

I have rewritten the article, please tell me if this is acceptable. Gordon Cyrus 19:52, 6 March 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gordoncyrus (talkcontribs)