Talk:What Were We Thinking Of/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:45, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Lead

• twenty-ninth studio album → you should write "29th" as numbers above 10 should not be written out
• of a relationship that has, over time, soured → of a relationship that has soured over time
• the song was well received → the song was well-received
• On the Adult Contemporary chart → On Billboard's Adult Contemporary component chart
• it peaked at number 32. → use "What Were We Thinking Of" here to avoid repeating yourself

Infobox

• Flawless ;)

Recording and release

• twenty-ninth studio album → same as in the lead
• and it was one of the first songs written by Armato → counting among the first ones to be penned by Armato
• because he is "very musical → because he was "very musical
• she also was interested → she was also interested

Lyrics and production

• Like the bulk of the songs → Like the majority of the songs
• and how to move on in life from them → this sounds quite unencyclopedic; can you find another way to say it?
• Streisand sings, "Where did → Lyrics of the track include: "Where did

Reception

• but it did reach the same → but did reach the same
• Everything else is well-written ;)

Track listing

• Flawless ;)

Charts

• Flawless ;)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 5.7% is great!

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
• No dead links! Good job!

Outcome

•  On hold for 7 days! Well-done!! Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:45, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

• Cartoon network freak – I finished this one. Nice working with you again. Have a nice holiday, Carbrera (talk) 22:05, 18 December 2017 (UTC).

• Gladly passing this great effort! Congrats; Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:19, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

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