Talk:Wash All Over Me/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 07:56, 17 September 2016 (UTC)

Soon... Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:56, 17 September 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• and Kanye West. Additional → connect sentences with a semicolon
• Tommy Brown with Charlie Heat serving as co-producer → Tommy Brown, with Charlie Heat serving as a co-producer
• The actual version was released on March 6, 2015. The demo version was predominantly influenced by disco and house music, which was essentially reworked in the album cut. → The actual version was made available on March 6, 2015, whilst its precedent mix was predominantly influenced by disco and house music before being reworked in the album cut.
• finds Madonna → portrays Madonna
• It was generally → The recording was generally
• music critics → link to music journalism
• with majority comparing → with the majority of them comparing

Background and release

• In mid 2014, Madonna uploaded → In mid 2014, she
• Madonna to take → Madonna taking
• tracks onto → tracks through
• pre-order → plural version
• Twelve additional tracks were also leaked, rumored to be produced by Avicii → Following this, Avicii was rumored to have produced twelve additional recordings that subsequently leaked.
• The demo was → The demo version of "Wash All Over Me"
• link "disco" and "house" to their respective articles.
• The album in its entirety was leaked online → Rebel Heart was leaked online in its entirety
• before its → in advance to its
• "Wash All Over Me" the album version was released on March 6, 2015 → The final mix of "Wash All Over Me" was subsequently released with its parent record on March 6, 2015.

Recording and composition

• Image > Set a full stop after the sentence
• Tommy Brown. The track was produced by Madonna, Avicii, Dean and West, with Charlie Heat serving as a co-producer. → Tommy Brown, whilst being produced by... ; Charlie Heat served as a co-producer.
• did the engineering → provided the engineering
• Pontare recorded → Pontare also recorded
• "Wash All Over Me" is a slow → Musically, ...
• contains the usage of → makes use of a
• the lyrics: → remove ":"
• spoke of them: → expressed that,
• In the second verse, she sings → The track's second verse portrays Madonna singing
• The singer makes → The singer further makes
• between", and later makes the comparison: → between". She later concludes that,

Critical reception

• concluding by calling it → further called it
• explaining that "This → explaining that, "This
• Furthermore, Nelson stated → Nelson went on stating that
• describing it as: → remove ":"

Credits and personnel

• Credits and personnel adapted from Madonna's official website → You may place this above the section.

Outcome

 On hold for 7 days. Good luck with editing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:34, 17 September 2016 (UTC)

@Cartoon network freak: All done! Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 22:01, 18 September 2016 (UTC)

Passing! Great work as usual. Congrats! Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:30, 19 September 2016 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.