Talk:Vinyl Williams

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Greg Fasolino in topic Tone of introductory section

Tone of introductory section edit

Not quite the neutral, factual tone there? Jcejhay (talk) 20:32, 20 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

It was wholly inappropriate. The entire article was in non-encyclopedic format and missing sources; it read like a bad press release. Thus my rewrite to conform to Wiki standards. It appears someone is attempting to restore the inappropriate tone and material, so editors here should pay attention. Greg Fasolino (talk) 14:06, 23 April 2018 (UTC)Reply