Talk:Lascar Row
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edithttp://www.cat-street.hk/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.218.131.228 (talk) 01:44, 8 August 2013 (UTC)
Too much photos
editand some of them are utterly meaningless to the street itself I suggest the following photos under the section 'Gallery' to be deleted:
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Sheung Wan Sports Centre
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Western market
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Sheung Wan Cooked Food Centre+Sheung Wan Market
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Bonham Strand and Morrison St
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Modern buildings and old-style estates are located together in this area
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Water Lane
I apologize to whom added these photos here ,yet buildings around Sheung Wan really don't mean much to Lascar Street.
another suggestion
editI been to the street some two weeks ago,it isn't such notable and I personally think this article already provided quite a good coverage of the street,it shouldn't be rated as a stub article.
and one final thing...
editI read this article before I went to the place and immediately spotted a few grammatical errors and corrected them.However, my sense of grammar isn't that good and there are still quite a few errors like this in the article.I wonder if anyone can help with this?