Talk:United States Post Office (Iowa Falls, Iowa)
Latest comment: 13 years ago by NortyNort in topic Copyvios
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editThere are a few sentences in here that seem a little iffy.
- "high stone foundation, broad entrance stairs and a pedimented portico." compared to "...high stone foundation, broad entrance stairs, and pediments portico..."
- "...consists of dark red brick laid in an English cross bond." compared to "...constructed of dark red brick laid in English cross-bond...
- "The foundation is North Carolina granite." compared to "... rests on a high foundation of North Carolina granite."
- "Three tall round arch openings are located..." compared to "Three tall round arched openings are located..."
- "Above the entrance are Della Robia-type swags." compared to "Above the entrance is a beautiful Della Robia type swag."
- "...features white oak woodwork, a terrazzo floor, and a vaulted ceiling." compared to "retains its white oak woodwork, marble-terrazo floor and vaulted ceiling."
- "The round arch openings contain multi-paned windows, which provide light to the interior." compared to "The round arched openings of the exterior are continued on the interior with multi-pane windows allowing light to pass from one space to another."
If this was just a couple of brief paraphrases, that would be one thing. But I've just listed nearly every sentence in the aricle. As the author of this article is not just some newbie, I won't tag this for SD yet. Nolelover It's almost football season! 21:04, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
- I removed the two paragraphs with the concerned text. This problem is hard to avoid with single sources for info. I suggest rewriting it.--NortyNort (Holla) 10:40, 25 May 2011 (UTC)