Talk:Trillium Party of Ontario

Latest comment: 6 years ago by HamOntPoliFiend in topic POV: Policies Section

POV: Policies Section

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This section reads like a campaign message, using meaningless political boilerplate like "greater involvement and connection with children and stronger voice in their future", "better protect democratic values", etc. It would benefit greatly from sources that are not the party website, and from critical engagement with the platform, including how it was developed, public/media responses, etc. Pbaribeau (talk) 22:23, 20 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • Hello, I've taken the time to add some neutral edits, elaborate more on the party's history, and found some secondary sources for references. I've added proper citations and have made the tone of the article more balanced. Hope this helps! HamOntPoliFiend (talk) 22:38, 3 March 2018 (UTC)Reply