Talk:Tom Linebarger

Some Proposed Changes

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Edit request 19-DEC-2023

Under Education section, add clarification that both master's degrees were earned at Stanford University. It could be added like "He has an MSc in manufacturing systems from the School of Engineering at Stanford University and an MBA from the Graduate School of Business at Stanford University." Under Career section, add correction that he began his career as an investment analyst (not investment manager) at Prudential Financial. He became an investment manager for the company in Hong Kong and Singapore. It could be corrected as "Linebarger began his career as an investment analyst for Prudential Finanancial and became an investment manager for the company in Hong Kong and Singapore." Under Career section, add updated/missing information that Linebarger retired from Cummins in 2022. It could be added as "Linebarger retired from Cummins in 2022." Under Career section, add updated/missing information that Linebarger has worked on fighting climate change and include examples of this work. It could be added as "Linebarger works on fighting climate change. As CEO of Cummins, he built a strategy to move to green power solutions. The strategy used the cash flow of the current business to fund the development and acquisition of new zero-carbon industrial and transportation solutions while working to maintain a leadership position for Cummins during the transition." Under Career section, add updated/missing information that Linebarger has shared his experience on green power solutions publicly, including meeting with White House officials, Members of Congress, including official testimony. It could be added as "Linebarger has spoken publicly about fighting climate change and green power solutions in the industrial and transportation sector. He has met with White House officials, and Members of Congress, including official testimony on these and related topics." Under Career section, add updated/missing information that Linebarger has written statements and op-eds on the topics of social justice and racial equity. It could be added as "Linebarger has written statements and opinion-editorials (op-eds) on social justice and racial equity. Published opinion pieces have focused on immigration reform and dismantling system racisim. Under Career section, add updated/missing information that Linebgarger has worked on female advancement during his career. It could be added as "Linebarger promoted the first woman CEO in Cummins' history. He also led a $23-million commitment by Cummins to support the advancement and prosperity of women and girls around the world." Under Boards section, add updated/missing information that Linebarger has been a member of numerous public and private boards in addition to Harley Davidson. It could be added as "Linebarger was a member of the Business Roundtable from 2012 to 2022, the Central Indiana Corporate Partnership from 2009 to 2023, serving as chair from 2021 to 2023. He was a member of the Hydrogen Council from 2018 to 2023, serving as chair from 2021 to 2023. Linebarger was a member of the U.S.-China Business Council from 2016 to 2022, serving as chair from 2020 to 2022." Under Personal Life section, add updated/missing information to include more details about Linebargers's early life. It could be added as "Linebarger was born in Los Altos, California in 1963. He was raised, along with his younger brother, by a single mother. The family relied on state assistance. His mother worked during the day and went to school at night, eventually becoming an occupational therapist." Reason for the change: Clarification that both master's degrees were earned at Stanford University. Correction that he began his career as an investment analyst (not investment manager) at Prudential Financial. He later became an investment manager for the company in Hong Kong and Singapore. Updated/missing information. Updated/missing information. Updated/missing information. Updated/missing information. Updated/missing information. Updated/missing information. Updated/missing information. References supporting change: https://americanenergyinnovation.org/tom-linebarger/ https://edgementoring.org/tom-linebarger/ https://www.businessroundtable.org/archive/about/members/tom-linebarger https://www.ibj.com/articles/cummins-ceo-tom-linebarger-to-step-down-aug-1 https://www.forbes.com/sites/alanohnsman/2022/02/23/how-diesel-giant-cummins-might-beat-tesla-in-the-green-engine-battle/?sh=4afa9bb043c8 https://www.whitehouse.gov/briefing-room/speeches-remarks/2022/01/26/remarks-by-president-biden-at-build-back-better-ceo-roundtable/#:~:text=THE%20PRESIDENT%3A%20Let%20me%20begin,has%20shown%20some%20real%20results. https://www.govinfo.gov/content/pkg/CHRG-115hhrg33481/pdf/CHRG-115hhrg33481.pdf https://www.indystar.com/story/news/politics/2017/07/18/cummins-ceo-congress-update-but-dont-end-nafta/489359001/ https://www.govinfo.gov/content/pkg/CHRG-109hhrg29812/pdf/CHRG-109hhrg29812.pdf https://www.indystar.com/story/opinion/2021/02/01/cummins-ceo-tom-linebarger-congress-daca-federal-law/4306924001/ https://www.indystar.com/story/opinion/2020/06/05/op-ed-2-indiana-ceos-pledge-action-help-end-systemic-racism-u-s/3137100001/ https://www.trucknews.com/business-management/cummins-leader-steps-aside-promotes-first-female-ceo-as-his-replacement/1003167386/ https://www.indystar.com/story/money/business/2022/07/14/jennifer-rumsey-cummins-indiana-engine-producer-first-woman-ceo-business/65373356007/ https://cxotoday.com/press-release/cummins-powers-women-supports-global-non-profit-rise-ups-program-to-strengthen-gender-equity-in-india/#:~:text=1%3A04%20pm-,Cummins%20Powers%20Women'%20Supports%20Global%20Non%2Dprofit%20Rise%20Up's%20Program,Strengthen%20Gender%20Equity%20in%20India&text=22%20local%20non%2Dprofit%20leaders,%2C%20and%20gender%2Dnonconforming%20people. https://www.cummins.com/company/esg/social/corporate-responsibility/cummins-powers-women https://www.businessroundtable.org/archive/about/members/tom-linebarger https://www.cicpindiana.com/cicp-elects-new-executive-committee-members/ https://hydrogencouncil.com/en/newmembers-newcochair-july2021/ https://www.uschina.org/media/press/us-china-business-council-elects-new-board-members-consequential-time-bilateral-relationship https://open.spotify.com/episode/68teQfIFaj0LfOyTRNIhD1?go=1&sp_cid=2d488ba67bddbf0ede60ee80c07545af&utm_source=embed_player_p&utm_medium=desktop&nd=1 https://www.forbes.com/sites/alanohnsman/2022/02/23/how-diesel-giant-cummins-might-beat-tesla-in-the-green-engine-battle/?sh=4afa9bb043c8 References

FebKate (talk) 16:22, 19 December 2023 (UTC)

Reply 20-DEC-2023

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Regards,  Spintendo  08:27, 20 December 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for your guidance. I will write a new edit request according to your direction. FebKate (talk) 20:46, 21 January 2024 (UTC)

Some Proposed Edits

• What I think should be changed (include citations):

1. Under Education section, update second sentence to: He has an MSc in manufacturing systems from the School of Engineering at Stanford University <ref>"Tom Linebarger (Emeritus)". American Innovation Energy Council. Retrieved 2024-01-21. and an MBA from the Graduate School of Business at Stanford University. <ref>"Tom Linebarger (Emeritus)". American Innovation Energy Council. Retrieved 2024-01-21.

2. Under Career section, update first sentence to: Linebarger began his career as an investment analyst for Prudential Financial <ref>"Tom Linebarger". Business Roundtable. Retrieved 2024-01-21. and became an investment manager for the company in Hong Kong and Singapore.<ref>"Tom Linebarger". Business Roundtable. Retrieved 2024-01-21.

3. Under Career section, add final sentence: Linebarger retired from Cummins in 2022.<ref>"Jennifer Rumsey named chair of the Cummins Board of Directors following retirement of Tom Linebarger". Cummins. Retrieved 2024-01-21.

4. Under Career section, add third paragraph: Linebarger works on fighting climate change. <ref>ohnsman, alan (2022-02-23). "How Diesel Giant Cummins Might Beat Tesla in the Green Engine Battle". Forbes. New Jersey: Forbes Media. Retrieved 2024-01-21. As CEO of Cummins, he built a strategy to move to green power solutions. The strategy used the cash flow of the current business to fund the development and acquisition of new zero-carbon industrial and transportation solutions while working to maintain a leadership position for Cummins during the transition.<ref>ohnsman, alan (2022-02-23). "How Diesel Giant Cummins Might Beat Tesla in the Green Engine Battle". Forbes. New Jersey: Forbes Media. Retrieved 2024-01-21. Linebarger has spoken publicly about fighting climate change and green power solutions in the industrial and transportation sector.<ref>Unlocking America's Energy Resources: Next Generation (PDF) (Report). 2006-05-18. Retrieved 2024-01-21. He has met with White House officials, and Members of Congress, including official testimony on these and related topics. <ref>Remarks by President Biden at Build Back Better CEO Roundtable (Speech). 2022-01-26. Retrieved 2024-01-21.<ref>Groppe, Maureen (2017-07-18). "Cummins CEO to Congress: Update, but don't end, NAFTA". Retrieved 2014-01-21.

5. Under Career section, add fourth section: Linebarger has written statements and opinion-editorials (op-eds) on social justice and racial equity. Published opinion pieces have focused on immigration reform and dismantling system racism.<ref>Linebarger, Tom (2021-02-01). "Cummins CEO: From rails to N95 masks, immigrants get the job done. Congress must do likewise". Retrieved 2024-01-21.<ref>Linebarger, Tom; Ricks, Dave (2020-06-05). "Op-ed: We must speak up and act to end racial inequality". Retrieved 2024-01-21.

6. Under Career section, add fifth section: Linebarger promoted the first woman CEO in Cummins' history.<ref>"Cummins leader steps aside, promotes first female CEO as his replacement". 2022-07-14. Retrieved 2024-01-21. He also led a $23-million commitment by Cummins to support the advancement and prosperity of women and girls around the world.<ref>"Cummins Powers Women' Supports Global Non-profit Rise Up's Program to Strengthen Gender Equity in India" (Press release). 2023-04-03. Retrieved 2024-01-21.

7. Under Boards section, add to existing section: Linebarger was a member of the Business Roundtable from 2012 to 2022 <ref>"Tom Linebarger". Archived from the original on 2021-05-10., the Central Indiana Corporate Partnership from 2009 to 2023, serving as chair from 2021 to 2023.<ref>"CICP Elects New Executive Committee Members". CICPvIndianaaccess-date=2024-01-21. 2021-01-14. He was a member of the Hydrogen Council from 2018 to 2023, serving as chair from 2021 to 2023. <ref>"Hydrogen Council Adds Fourteen New Members Including Bankers, Engineers, Industrials and Energy Companies, Confirming Wide-Ranging Interest in Hydrogen". Hydrogen Council. Retrieved 2021-07-12. Linebarger was a member of the U.S.-China Business Council from 2016 to 2022, serving as chair from 2020 to 2022.<ref>"US-China Business Council Elects New Board Members at Consequential Time in the Bilateral Relationship". 2021-06-15. Retrieved 2024-01-21.

8. Under Personal Life section, update to: Linebarger was born in Los Altos, California in 1963. He was raised, along with his younger brother, by a single mother. The family relied on state assistance. His mother worked during the day and went to school at night, eventually becoming an occupational therapist.<ref>Tutu Jereissati and Ryan Lenney (2023-03-01). "Living a life of purpose with Tom Linebarger". Spotify (Podcast). Retrieved 2024-01-21.

• Why it should be changed:

1. Clarification that both master's degrees were earned at Stanford University.

2. Correction that he began his career as an investment analyst (not investment manager) at Prudential Financial. He later became an investment manager for the company in Hong Kong and Singapore.

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FebKate (talk) 00:49, 22 January 2024 (UTC)

References

Hello @FebKate:, thank you for submitting this edit request. I have decided to decline your request at present as many of the statements you wish to be added appear to be aimed at promoting the subject. We may be able to add more information about Linebarger's education if a source that is independent of any company Linebarger has connections with can be found, but we will not be able to add the information about Linebarger's actions at the companies he works for or his social justice initiatives. I hope you understand this. Thank you, Redtree21 (talk) 08:55, 25 February 2024 (UTC)