Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for starting the page on Tom Brenna. It's helpful to see the neat description of key areas of work, but the page is missing a chronological biographical narrative, which might be an area for improvement in the future.

Klbrain (talk) 08:57, 28 March 2024 (UTC)Reply