Talk:There Goes My Baby (Usher song)

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Petergriffin9901 in topic GA Review
Good articleThere Goes My Baby (Usher song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
March 26, 2010Articles for deletionRedirected
November 28, 2010Good article nomineeListed
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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Reviewer: --CallMeNathanTalk2Me 04:22, 22 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • The song was later -> repetitive, try "it"
Done.
  • While reaching a peak of twenty-five on the Billboard Hot 100, the song topped the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs -> doesn't read like a complete sentence. Should consider merging.
Done
  • favored the clip -> its not a clip, its a complete video
Done. Candyo32

Composition

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  • was warmly received -> the song or his use of his falsetto range?
Falsetto range. I think the current wording world imply that as the falsetto range mentioning comes after the song.

Chart performance

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  • solely from digital downloads as a promo single -> awkward
Done
  • since the inception of the chart -> what year is that?
The year is not given in the source. It only says "inception."
  • a feat not matched since his Confessions era -> a feat no one matched? or just him?
By him, changed.

Music video

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  • screenshot -> too risque to include in the article :P lol
Confused at what you are getting at lol.
  • while he stands in a field and the sun rises in the background -> an the sun should be re-worded
Done.

Live performances

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  • You write "performed" like 6 times. I know its tricky, but try and mix it up.
Done. Candyo32 20:36, 28 November 2010 (UTC)Reply