Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 4 June 2019 and 31 July 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): User:GAJH123.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 04:16, 18 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

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OK--you know what I am going to say: there really is just nothing here, just a sentence and a half. This needs content, and it needs it quick. Dr Aaij (talk) 02:05, 28 June 2019 (UTC)Reply

Yes I am sorry. I have had work all day Thursday and today, although I am aware excuses are just that..excuses. I have added some tonight and will have the article and the review of a classmates's article done before Monday when we move on. Dr Aaij (talk)GAJH123 (talk) 04:20, 29 June 2019 (UTC)Reply

Peer Review

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I believe that your article is well-written. You use correct grammar as far as I can tell (but I'm not an expert). You have unbiased, factual information. I think that, since you cannot find negative criticism, you could add positive criticism just to give more insight to the reviews. My personal suggestion is to add an infobox. To me, an infobox is a great way to compile basic information about a topic in one place. Good job so far! Bmichelleh (talk) 15:40, 1 July 2019 (UTC)Reply