Talk:The Fleetwoods
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History edit
This section seems to start mid-paragraph: "Troxel and Christopher sang her melody and lyrics in counterpoint to his jazz riff. 'Come Softly To Me' was also covered by..." Apparently the beginning of the article has been erased.
Laodah (talk) 06:27, 22 September 2014 (UTC)
The first sentence of the second paragraph "They performed the song twice at school functions, and their classmates wanted recordings of it so they could learn the song" is also the third sentence from the end of the first paragraph. It appears that it should be removed from the second paragraph.Wcomm (talk) 09:27, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Fourth paragraph, "The Fleetwoods continued ..." middle, contains "He joined the Naval Reserve in 1956. U.S. Navy." Perhaps this should be "He joined the U.S. Naval Reserve in 1956." That would make more sense.Wcomm (talk) 09:34, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Troxel v. Granville edit
Paragraph eight - Does this part of the article really belong here? It has absolutely no relevance to the artist or their music. Frankzappatwin (talk) 16:13, 6 June 2017 (UTC)