Talk:The Classic Christmas Album (Barbra Streisand album)/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Aoba47 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 01:09, 11 April 2017 (UTC)
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- I am not sure about the phrasing "responded well" as "well" sounds pretty informal to me so I would revise this with stronger language if possible.
- The phrasing "extensive catalog" is rather POV-ish; I do not think the word "extensive" is entirely necessary here.
- I am not certain about the use of the transition "Meanwhile" and I would suggest either removing it or changing it with something else.
- This is more of a clarification question, but do you know if there are any more reviews for this album? If not, then it is fine as it currently stands.
- Do you have any information on the songwriters and producers for the album for the "Track listing" section?
- Final comments
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- My comments are relatively minor as everything is very well done for this article. Let me know when you have addressed this comment, and I will pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 01:29, 11 April 2017 (UTC)
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- I will fail this as there is no indication that the main article's contributor will address this review and the requisite seven day period has passed. Good luck with getting this promoted in the future. If you decide to put this up again in the future for GAN after making the adjustments according to my comments above, I would suggest having a different user look at this for a different perspective. Aoba47 (talk) 15:29, 19 April 2017 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.