Talk:The Boat Race 1879/GA1
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Ritchie333 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Ritchie333 (talk · contribs) 13:31, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
Another day, another boat race
Lead edit
- Since the lead is very short, maybe just a quick mention of the overall tally of wins (as mentioned in the body) could go in here
- Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:42, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
Background edit
- Per earlier reviews, a description of the different Blues would be useful
- Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:42, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
- "the "dead heat" of 1877" - could be linked to the article in question
- Done.. although trying to avoid Easter eggs, would you prefer the whole thing to be linked rather than just 1877? The Rambling Man (talk) 13:42, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
- Yes, I think that would be for the best. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 13:43, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
- Done deal. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:45, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
- Yes, I think that would be for the best. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 13:43, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
- Done.. although trying to avoid Easter eggs, would you prefer the whole thing to be linked rather than just 1877? The Rambling Man (talk) 13:42, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
Race edit
- I think this is the first Boat Race GAN where I've not seen any quotations in this section. While you shouldn't go overboard with quotes, one or two do make this section more interesting than just a bland commentary of who went where. For a race such as this, which was pretty uneventful, it would be even more useful.
- Found a quote about the mediocrity of the crews... Added. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:42, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
Summary edit
Not much to this one - a fairly dull race by the account here. Anyway, on hold. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 13:31, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
- Indeedy, thanks again, I've addressed and responded to all your comments above. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:42, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
- No problem. Passed. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 13:46, 4 January 2015 (UTC)