Talk:The 48 Laws of Power/Archives/2017

Multiple issues - have they been solved

There are article improvement templates at the top of the article page saying that the article has multiple issues:

  • This article contains content that is written like an advertisement. (January 2014)
  • This article may have too many section headers dividing up its content. (January 2014)

If you compare the version that existed on 1 January 2014 with the current version, I think you would agree that the content is now more balanced, and there does not seem to be a header problem. Does anyone object to be removing the article improvement templates?-- Toddy1 (talk) 09:01, 13 January 2016 (UTC)

I personally do not believe these problems have been solved. The article (especially the link section) still seems very much like an advertisement. YuHuw (talk) 10:36, 20 January 2016 (UTC)
Thanks. It needed someone like you to make an appraisal. I will leave the templates there.-- Toddy1 (talk) 19:59, 20 January 2016 (UTC)
You are welcome. YuHuw (talk) 08:45, 22 January 2016 (UTC)
I've trimmed it a bit more - and also removed the "too many sections" template since there are only 2 now. Do you guys think we can remove the last template altogether now? Popo le Chien throw a bone 14:03, 26 January 2017 (UTC)
Except for one paragraph, it still reads like an advertisement.-- Toddy1 (talk) 11:49, 27 January 2017 (UTC)

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