Talk:Sylvia Amorsolo-Lazo
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Comments regarding your article about Sylvia A.
editHi GuatemalaRichmonde, I read your request in my talk page and have read your sandbox. I suggest deleting your "Footnotes" subsection as it appears to be empty -- unless you are planning on editing your sandbox to add more details. You article also seem short and I suggest adding more content (such as the names of Sylvia's siblings and a brief background about her husband). You should also add the reference for your first subsection.
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editPlease add more information about the life to the artist Lazo, Thank you! Kikomori012 (talk) 01:05, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
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editHi GuatemalaRichmonde. I checked your sandbox and i think you can add more information about the artist. Your article is well organized but i think you may either delete the Footnotes section because it's empty or add something into it. Minho12345 (talk) 01:15, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
Comments from ParaSaCompArt
editHello, did she stop exhibiting her works after 2009?
ParaSaCompArt (talk) 01:37, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
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editHi! Put more artworks of the artist in your article. Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kelly120913 (talk • contribs) 02:00, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
wieluxx
editHi I suggest you to put some more information about your artist. Wieluxx (talk) 02:04, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
GuatemalaRichmonde Sandbox Check
editHello. I noticed that there are some parts that are limited or didn't have any content. I suggest you edit it or remove those sections if you can't provide it with information. You should add more information about her professional life. The detaild about her parents are redundant since they were both mentioned at the start then again in her early life.Ms.popsie21 (talk) 02:40, 7 April 2015 (UTC)