Talk:Supermarine Sea Lion I
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Amitchell125 in topic GA Review
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Will it float? edit
Can somebody who knows more about it than me check & confirm she was a flying boat & not a floatplane? Trekphiler (talk) 01:50, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
- The image of G-EALP in British Civil Aircraft since 1919 shows it is a flying boat (and so does the description). MilborneOne (talk) 10:50, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
- A picture of the Sea Lion I appeared in Flight in 1940 Flightglobal 18-Apr-1940. MilborneOne (talk) 13:15, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:15, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "at Bournemouth, England in" comma after England.
- Could link Aircraft registration.
- "British elimination trials" what were these?
- "Later on during the race, the aircraft inverted and sank " presumably it was on the water at the time?
- " Lion I.[1] [8]" no spaces between refs.
- "the fly-off the" what's that?
- "Supermarine remained at sea" the company Supermarine?
- "Aircraft 1919-1972." en-dash.
That's all I have, nice article. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:11, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: All above points addressed, thanks for the review. Amitchell125 (talk) 13:00, 4 September 2021 (UTC)