Talk:Stress in the aviation industry
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Great use of sources. Some language/grammar issues that will be ironed out in the peer review process – but a very good start. Great job! Skearns4 (talk) 17:45, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
Can I add a section on military pilot stress to your article? On it's own mine cant be published and your article is good!
The title: stress in the aviation industry is very broad, as in stress when the pilots are flying? or stress because of their schedule? or stress because of their family? You should be more specific on the topic or at least add a introductory paragraph stating what this article will be focusing on. With all these said, this article is very well researched and has sufficient information with lots of content. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into this, good work! Wlin72 (talk) 20:39, 18 November 2015 (UTC)
This article is well-organized with reliable information and sources. I was able to understand the topic and I also was able to get some more information from link that you created. However, in my opinion, it is better you create more links to other wiki pages about words that is not related to your topic. Also, I think this article is written more like in essay format. For example, the first two sentences of abstract paragraph sounds like it's your opinion. If you can put some more evidences or footnote, your article will be more clear. And also, there is some numbers noted without footnotes. I think you can cite those numbers so that reader can get more information. Dhur2 (talk) 21:37, 18 November 2015 (UTC)
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Chronic or acute or both edit
You mention chronic stress in a war zone. While that can be true it is also acute in battle. Please consider changes with citations to make it crystal clear. Fiddle Faddle 12:13, 3 December 2015 (UTC)