Talk:St Mary's Orthodox Church, Kallooppara

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Neutrality of Article and Citing Sources

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Dear Wikipedia Editors,

I am writing to discuss some potentially edits and improvements to this stub. Two issues currently raised with this article is the neutrality of the article there are certain phrases used which compramises the neutrality of the author. Some of these include "The church is an elegant representation of the beautiful shingled roof tops" and "The church is a perfect example of the ancient temple architecture". These comments come accros as subjective as it falls to personal opinion if it is "an elegant representation of..." or "a perect example of...". If these statements had been made based of comments of professional or academics who have studied the areas that the comments have been made about, who were then referenced, they would be appropriate to leave. For this reason I have edited the article at these two areas.

Additionally, there is no inline citiation of the websites used which is odd especially since sections of text have been copied word for word. I have added a citation at the end of the first paragraph of "Church History "to ammend this issue. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tomlinsonwong (talkcontribs) 06:17, 24 March 2022 (UTC)Reply