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No Neutrality edit
Whomever added the bulk of the history section comes across as very bitter and jaded. That the league folded is, of course, under no dispute. However, things like "Poorly conceived and weakly executed, the league was a disaster from the start as they could only get leases in less than desirable baseball markets" speak of nothing neutral at all. Besides that, the citation following that sentence has nothing to do with prose (it's a link to ballparkreviews.com entry on one of the stadiums used). I wouldn't even know where to start with fixing this one. Sliver7 (talk) 19:54, 13 March 2010 (UTC)