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@GhostP.: In the "Background and release" section, what is meant by "on there"? Where is "there"? Could you elaborate? --TheSandDoctorTalk 05:11, 13 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
"He described it..." - the place he was staying or the track?
@TheSandDoctor: thank you for copyediting the article! About "on there", it means "on the West Coast", "His studio on the West Coast". "He described it..." this is about the studio. GhostP.talk 05:44, 13 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
You're welcome, GhostP.! Thank you for clarifying. I am glad that I could help. --TheSandDoctorTalk 21:10, 13 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Add a short description and then alt text to the infobox's image.
Done for short description. For alt text, I unfortunately don't know exactly how to do it because the image is not too simple to describe, and it's even harder as a non-native English speaker, I believe. In the past I've also promoted articles to GA without using alt text, so I don't know if it's really necessary. GhostP.talk 03:08, 20 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Improve the image's non-free use rationale with this template.
According to Ghostly International, the label on which the album was released, this is where the story "takes a dark turn", with the astronaut making contact with the "Wave 1 colony". – reword. Maybe → According to Ghostly International, the label on which the album was released is where the story "takes a dark turn" and features the astronaut making contact with the "Wave 1 colony".
I made a different change, because the source states that the astronaut makes contact with the "Wave 1 colony" "[a]t the conclusion of Wave 1" (2014), not exactly in Silicon Tare, but I forgot to add this. GhostP.talk 03:08, 20 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Is #Release_history necessary if it only features one release?
I agree it is not needed, removed. GhostP.talk 03:08, 20 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Same thing with #Charts, can the detail be moved/merged into a different section?
Charts usually get their own section even if the album/single charted only once, so I think it can stay. I did remove the one line sentence, though. GhostP.talk 03:08, 20 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Done for short description. For alt text, I unfortunately don't know exactly how to do it because the image is not too simple to describe, and it's even harder as a non-native English speaker, I believe. In the past I've also promoted articles to GA without using alt text, so I don't know if it's really necessary. GhostP. talk 03:08, 20 July 2021 (UTC)