Talk:Senegal at the 2010 Winter Olympics

Latest comment: 7 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Senegal at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:30, 17 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 17:30, 17 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lede edit

  • "although finished ahead of fellow African Samir Azzimani of Morocco in the giant slalom." - although he finished ahead of fellow African Samir Azzimani of Morocco in the giant slalom.

Background edit

  • Winter Olympics is a dab link
  • "fellow skier Leyti Seck was the national's sole athlete" - missing team in between "national's" and "sole"
  • "Seck, a Germany-born athlete" - German-born
  • "not finishing in the Men's slalom or giant slalom." - but not finishing in the men's slalom or giant slalom

Alpine Skiing edit

  • Nothing wrong here

References edit

  • All the text is supported by the references
  • Sports Reference should only be linked on the first instance
  • Paris Match, Eurosport Vancouver Sun, Reuters and Associated Press need to be wikilinked
  • Reference 5 needs The Sunday Telegraph as its work
  • no dead links

On hold for the issues. Good work! MWright96 (talk) 18:21, 17 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: Thanks for reviewing, I've made the changes you listed. Miyagawa (talk) 19:23, 17 October 2016 (UTC)Reply
Nice. Promoting to GA. MWright96 (talk) 19:37, 17 October 2016 (UTC)Reply