Tone
editThere are certain parts of this article that seem to drift close to an almost advertisement-like quality. Some editing for tone would go a long way. BU Rob13 (talk) 16:53, 12 June 2015 (UTC)
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There are certain parts of this article that seem to drift close to an almost advertisement-like quality. Some editing for tone would go a long way. BU Rob13 (talk) 16:53, 12 June 2015 (UTC)Reply