Semi-protected edit request on 21 July 2023

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In order to 1) explain the use of the word "scuffle" and 2) explain how blackmail came from this, please add quote from stated source. Change...

From: In 1999, Crowe was involved in a scuffle at the Plantation Hotel in Coffs Harbour, which was caught on a security camera.[91] Two men were acquitted of using the video in an attempt to blackmail him.[92]

To: In 1999, Crowe was involved in a scuffle at the Plantation Hotel in Coffs Harbour, which was caught on a security camera."About 3am, as the video shows, the then 35-year-old actor was involved in a melee, arguing heatedly with a woman and kissing a man who tries to calm him down." [91] Two men were acquitted of using the video in an attempt to blackmail him.[92] Papermagepk (talk) 02:57, 21 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

  Not done: Adding that sentence from the source word-to-word would be a copyright infringement. Deauthorized. (talk) 20:14, 21 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
  Partly done: I agree that it is not clear why he was blackmailed over the event, so I have added further clarification. It is sufficiently different to the original text so I hope this addresses both concerns. If neither party is satisfied feel free to revert without prejudice and we will negotiate alternative wording here. Betty Logan (talk) 01:14, 22 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
As the text is now (on the published page), it again makes no sense, i.e. it's completely unclear how and why he would be blackmailed.
You could just combine the two versions;
In 1999, Crowe was involved in a heated argument at the Plantation Hotel in Coffs Harbour, during which he also kissed a man who was trying to calm him down. Two men/employees were aquitted of using the video in an attempt to blackmail Crowe. JoostvG (talk) 12:27, 18 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Semi-protected edit request on 18 June 2024

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In the Personal Life - Altercations section: third paragraph, about the BAFTAS. So why was Crowe's segment cut? For time reasons or for copyright reasons? JoostvG (talk) 12:30, 18 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

  Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Charliehdb (talk) 13:37, 18 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
I'm not so invested in the story that I plan to redo the research of the original poster. They are the one(s) who should amend this paragraph. JoostvG (talk) 16:31, 18 June 2024 (UTC)Reply