Talk:Rotary friction welding

Feedback from New Page Review process

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Please consider splitting this article in sections.

Willbb234^Talk (please {{ping}} me in replies) 22:22, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

Issues with this page

Hi, I don't know much about welding so I don't feel very confident fixing this page myself but it seems like there are a number of problems with this page. Firstly, it has poor grammar and there are many grammar errors, such as sentences with incorrect or missing punctuation. Secondly, item #15 in the table of contents is blank. The external links section has many sub-headings and doesn't seem to fit the standard for external links sections on Wikipedia, since they are meant to be kept to a minimum. The overall structure of the article is personally confusing to me. For example, sections like "Rotary friction welding for plastics" might fit better as a sub-section of "Types of materials to be welded" (though that section itself needs cleanup too). Also, the section "Low Force Friction Welding" seems very reliant on one source (EWI and Manufacturing Technology Inc. (MTI)) and that section doesn't seem very neutral. It almost reads as advertisement, or as a conflict of interest. Rorb lalorb (talk) 18:42, 2 January 2024 (UTC)