Talk:Rock Bottom (SpongeBob SquarePants)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 11:00, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

Suppose I'll handle this as well. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 11:00, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

Alright, here we go!

• In the episode, SpongeBob got stranded in an aphotic zone called Rock Bottom. "got" -> "becomes" per WP:TENSE
  • Done. Mediran (t • c) 23:53, 22 September 2013 (UTC)
• The cliff leads to a sort of aphotic zone called Rock Bottom, inhabited by multiple strange deep-sea animals. Remove the "sort of"
  • Done. Mediran (t • c) 23:53, 22 September 2013 (UTC)
• Williams cited the episode as "so small that you could explore gags and opportunities for gags." I'm not sure "cited" is the best word here. The source just says "It was so small that you could explore gags and opportunities for gags." so try Williams said the episode was "so small that you could explore gags and opportunities for gags."
  • Done. Mediran (t • c) 23:53, 22 September 2013 (UTC)
• Nancy Basile of the About.com drop the superfluous "the"
  • Done. Mediran (t • c) 23:53, 22 September 2013 (UTC)
• Estep remarked she mentioned made the episode "so well-remembered." This doesn't make sense.
  • Done. Mediran (t • c) 23:53, 22 September 2013 (UTC)
• The episode "Rock Bottom" Since this an article about the episode, you can drop the "the episode" as there's not going to be any confusion over what it is.
  • Done. Mediran (t • c) 23:53, 22 September 2013 (UTC)
• The ride based on the series first opened remove the "based on the series" - it's obvious
  • Done. Mediran (t • c) 23:53, 22 September 2013 (UTC)

That's it. On hold now. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 14:12, 22 September 2013 (UTC)

Thank you on reviewing this article. I know the article is so short but still I know this can make it to GA. Thanks! Mediran (t • c) 23:53, 22 September 2013 (UTC)

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Decluttering the plot section

The entire plot section is a piece by piece recollection of the episode, with several unnecessary details about the plot, as well as numerous run-on sentences. I want to reach a consensus before I try to declutter the article. Anyone against this?Club On a Sub 20 (talk) 18:46, 6 December 2022 (UTC)