Talk:Richard P. Mills (educator)

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Dactylion in topic NPOV Check

NPOV Check edit

This account of Mills's tenure as Commissioner of Education of New York State needs editing not just for grammar, but for substance. Phrases like "unprecedent steps", "Most troubling . . ." and "Mills acknowledged . . .", for example, suggest that this was written by a political opponent. Dactylion (talk) 02:36, 11 August 2009 (UTC)Reply