Talk:Prides Crossing station/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 17:05, 9 March 2021 (UTC)Reply


Comments

  • What's a "flag stop"?
    •   Done linked.
  • "(B&M) in 1885. The B&M operated" repetitive, why not just "(B&M) in 1885 which operated"?
    •   Done Reworded.
  • " level crossing" link.
    •   Done
  • "a one-story stick style now" maybe Briteng, but feels like there's a word missing, like "construction" after the style.
    •   Done Added the missing word.
  • "The Gloucester Branch opened to" overlinked.
    •   Done
  • I see "wealthy residents " is linked to the section on "notable residents" - do we know they all used this station?
    • On the 8:02 and Beverly Revisited don't refer to specific residents, but state that they were well-used by the wealthy residents. I've added citations that specifically list several of them using the station, and several others arriving on private sidings.
  • "February 1, 1981 due" comma after year.
    •   Done
  • "lasted into" continued into.
    • I think the existing phrasing works fine.
  • "The NTSB determined" don't use acronyms without explaining them first.
    •   Done
  • Salem link?
    •   Done
  • "mini-high platforms " what are those?
    •   Done
  • "was nominated for closures " why plural?
    •   Done Typo fixed.
  • Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles.
    •   Done
  • Spaced hyphen in ref titles should be spaced en-dash.
    •   Done
  • "MBTA - Prides Crossing" also should be an en-dash.
    •   Done
  • Is the "depot" building the same as the station building? If not, it only seems to be mentioned in the lead. If so, I'm confused.
    •   Done Yes, the same building. I've standardized on "station" to clarify
  • Where is "fare zone 5" mentioned or referenced?
    •   Done Ref added.
  • Montserrat is not mentioned in the article other than in the infobox.
    • That's a navigation template, standard for station articles.

That's all I have for now. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 17:30, 10 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the review! I believe I've addressed all your items above. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 05:49, 12 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
Ok, happy with that so passing. Good work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 08:07, 12 March 2021 (UTC)Reply