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Talk:Polish Righteous Among the Nations/GA1

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Latest comment: 15 years ago by Kensplanet in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

Latest comment: 15 years ago14 comments3 people in discussion

I'll be reviewing this article. Thanks, Kensplanet (talk) 13:03, 4 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

(1). Well written:  
1 (a). the prose is clear and the spelling and grammar are correct; and  
1 (b). it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, jargon, words to avoid, fiction, and list incorporation.  

(2). Factually accurate and verifiable:  
2 (a). it provides references to all sources of information, and at minimum contains a section dedicated to the attribution of those sources in accordance with the guide to layout;  
2 (b). at minimum, it provides in-line citations from reliable sources for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons; and  
2 (c). it contains no original research.  

(3). Broad in its coverage:  
3 (a). it addresses the main aspects of the topic; and  
3 (b). it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail  

(4). Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without bias.  

(5). Stable: it does not change significantly from day-to-day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.  

(6). Illustrated, if possible, by images:  
6 (a) images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content; and  
6 (b). images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions  

1a

  • In total 6,066 people[1] despite the fact that in German-occupied Poland all household members were punished by death if a Jew were found concealed in their home or on their property.
    What happened to the 6,066 people?     Kensplanet (talk) 13:25, 4 October 2008 (UTC)Reply
  • Hundreds of thousands of Polish citizens hid hundreds of thousands of their Jewish neighbours; many of them were individual initiatives, but there were also more or less organized networks dedicated to aiding this task.
    This needs a copyedit.
    Many Non-Jewish Polish citizens hid thousands of their Jewish neighbours; many of them were individual initiatives, but dedicated organized networks were also present.     Kensplanet (talk) 13:45, 4 October 2008 (UTC)Reply
  • Most notably, in September 1942, the Provisional Committee to Aid Jews (Tymczasowy Komitet Pomocy Żydom) was founded on the initiative of Zofia Kossak-Szczucka
    Please provide some context for Zofia Kossak-Szczucka, like what was s/he. Was s/he a Polish writer, soldier ec...
Prose looks good after copyedits. Kensplanet (talk) 08:36, 5 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

1b

  • The Lead is incomplete. No mention of Activities in the Lead. Kensplanet (talk) 13:33, 4 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

2b
*Checking References. All References checked. Looks fine for a GA. Kensplanet (talk) 13:33, 4 October 2008 (UTC) Reply

6a

Thankyou, I have done it.
  • Secondly, Image:Maria-Kotarba-Auschwitz.jpg has also been tagged for deletion on Commons. It may be a copyrighted Image. Unless and until you prove it it is not copyrighted, this article cannot pass GA. I suggest you to remove that image and put it back later when its copyright status is proved. Kensplanet (talk) 13:22, 4 October 2008 (UTC)Reply
I have removed Image:Henryk Wolinski.jpg which is violation of WP:NFC and temporarily removed Image:Maria-Kotarba-Auschwitz.jpg which may be deleted in the best interest of the article. You can readd it later.

This article satisfies all GA criteria. Hence, it will be promoted. Thanks, Kensplanet (talk) 08:59, 5 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

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