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Objective and neutral writing style edit
Paul Sellers is no doubt a fantastic person in all regards which is the reason why I looked at this article in the first place. However, the present article does not conform to the standards of an encyclopedia article of being objective and neutral. Some examples for this are:
"Paul has established a considerable worldwide presence and following on Youtube, where he shares his long experience of woodworking with hand tools, with current and future generations. " - Please provide an objective measure for this such as subscriber numbers on YouTube. "...which might compromise his impartiality and credibility." - while this may be true, it is a hard to prove conclusion. Leave it up to the reader whether to draw that conclusion and leave it out. "the Cinderella of woodworking hand-tools" - subjective wording "The humble and ubiquitous #4 plane " - subjective wording "has mentioned in various contexts" - Which contexts? "it is more than a profession to him, it is his life style and his life" - if this is a quote indicate more clearly that it is, otherwise drop this wording
This is in no way a criticism of the person, merely of the writing style of this article.