Talk:Pan Lakshat Kon Gheto
Latest comment: 5 years ago by PopularOutcast in topic Copy editing
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Copy editing edit
@PopularOutcast: Hello, Thanks for your copy editing. Actually, the plot section needs close paraphrasing, because some sentences from 'plot section' are very close to the original source. A plot line is also given in the Encyclopedia of Indian Literature which I haven't used. If you want to see, I can send it to you through mail. Once again thanks. -Gazal world (talk) 11:36, 16 January 2019 (UTC)
- Gazal world, You are quite welcome. Do you think that what is in the article now is okay or does it need to be changed? Did I change the meaning of anything that should not have been changed? PopularOutcasttalk2me! 22:44, 16 January 2019 (UTC)
- @PopularOutcast: Hello. All things is OK. Just I am saying that the 'plot section' needs 'paraphrasing'. Can you rewrite it with changing sentences of 'plot section' ? (I wrote plot from 'Modern Indian Literature: an Anthology: Fiction. Vol. 2' Ref. no. 3). I have mailed you. Check your inbox. Feel free to ask me if you have any problem. Thanks. -Gazal world (talk) 07:53, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- Gazal world, got your email. Thanks for the sources. I want to make sure that I understand ... you would like me to do some more editing on the plot section because you are concerned that what is currently in there is too close to the original source? PopularOutcasttalk2me! 15:29, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- @PopularOutcast: Yes bro. You are absolutely right. Please, Feel free to edit anything. Thanks. -Gazal world (talk) 15:33, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- Gazal world, LOL. Sorry it took me so long to understand. I will get to it over the next few days. Cheers. PopularOutcasttalk2me! 15:38, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- Gazal world, I just wanted to add that what you are requesting is outside the scope of the work that the Guild of Copyeditors does. I am happy to do it, but for the future other projects would probably be more appropriate for getting help like this, maybe WikiProject Indian literature. PopularOutcasttalk2me! 15:55, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- Noted
Gazal world (talk) 16:13, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- Gazal world, Hopefully that will do. Good luck! PopularOutcasttalk2me! 22:12, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- Noted
- @PopularOutcast: Yes bro. You are absolutely right. Please, Feel free to edit anything. Thanks. -Gazal world (talk) 15:33, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- Gazal world, got your email. Thanks for the sources. I want to make sure that I understand ... you would like me to do some more editing on the plot section because you are concerned that what is currently in there is too close to the original source? PopularOutcasttalk2me! 15:29, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- @PopularOutcast: Hello. All things is OK. Just I am saying that the 'plot section' needs 'paraphrasing'. Can you rewrite it with changing sentences of 'plot section' ? (I wrote plot from 'Modern Indian Literature: an Anthology: Fiction. Vol. 2' Ref. no. 3). I have mailed you. Check your inbox. Feel free to ask me if you have any problem. Thanks. -Gazal world (talk) 07:53, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
