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  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): TurinHorse2011. Peer reviewers: Kaityzoz.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:04, 18 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

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Great article. Although it seems pretty much complete, another thing that you could do is add her to other pages. I added links from two of the movie wiki pages to her name as screenwriter (she was listed, but not clickable). I noticed that the Tisch school has a wiki page with faculty listed but not her name, so you could add her there, and even add her to her husband's page. These are just recommendations, not requirements. E clark e100 (talk) 18:53, 25 March 2016 (UTC)Reply

Peer review (Kaity):

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I really have no edits/suggestions to offer. This is very thorough and well-written. In the first paragraph of the "Film Career" section, Louise Ghertler's name is unnecessarily italicized. That's all I got! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kaityzoz (talkcontribs) 21:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)Reply