Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit

  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 15 October 2018 and 15 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Nick Fedoronko.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 05:51, 17 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Peer Review edit

1. I thought the detail in this article was very impressive and I did not know anything about Orompoto prior to reading it, so it was informative as well!

2. My main suggestion would be to ensure that all the points have citations following them because I noticed some sentences toward the middle of the article that were missing citations. In addition, make sure there are citations accompanying any new material you add to the article in the future.

3. The most important thing that could be done to improve this article, in my opinion, would be to properly cite all of the information presented to ensure there is no plagiarism present. Overall, this article was very well written and informative so this would be my only suggestion.

4. After reviewing this article, I've realized that I need to double check the information in my own article and make sure that I have paraphrased the important quotes and cited them properly to avoid plagiarism as well.

5. You have a great start to this article, Nick! I hope these comments are helpful and I enjoyed learning more about Orompoto's life through this article!

AEP2021 (talk) 21:24, 26 November 2018 (UTC)Reply