Talk:Organized horse fighting

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Athomeinkobe in topic Article thoughts

Article thoughts

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One thing that would be useful to add is that horse fights in a natural setting rarely result in injuries, let alone death; like so many other dominance displays, usually the weaker animal disengages quickly and runs off. This confinement of the animals enhances the injuries and suffering of the combatants Montanabw(talk) 23:00, 1 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

A very good point - it might be difficult to find something specific to horses but I am sure there is a general comment out there. Leave it with me. DrChrissy (talk) 23:04, 1 May 2016 (UTC)Reply
Done. DrChrissy (talk) 23:37, 1 May 2016 (UTC)Reply
The second sentence of the lead is a run on sentence that is very difficult to parse. I would like to rewrite it myself, but cannot access the first reference to confirm what is being said. DrChrissy, would you be able to take another look at it and reword it? AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 00:07, 6 May 2016 (UTC)Reply
Yes it was rather convoluted. I've made changes - see what you think. DrChrissy (talk) 14:57, 6 May 2016 (UTC)Reply
That's better, thanks. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 03:12, 10 May 2016 (UTC)Reply