Talk:Olin Corporation
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Morgan Hill, California fusee plant
editOlin operated a fusee (highway flare) plant in Morgan Hill, California in the 1960s and 1970s, possibly into the 1980s, which was subsequently sold. It was operated as Standard Fusee Corp. for a few more years, then razed. Not long afterward, high levels of potassium perchlorate were discovered in groundwater, contaminating many private wells and some municipal wells in the the downstream "plume", whose origins were blamed on the fusee plant. Olin became involved in litigation with local residents and communities, and has to-date paid considerable sums in groundwater cleanup and remediation. This might be worth mentioning in the article if enough facts could be collected on the case. It should also be noted that United Technologies Corporation operated a research and testing facility a few miles to the north of Morgan Hill for many years, near Coyote, California, and some of the perchlorate contamination may have emanated from there, as well. Solid rocket fuel was mixed in large batches there and full-scale tests of the Titan III boosters was conducted there from the 1960s to the 1980s. Further, there have been suggestions that additional perchlorate in the soil may have come from over a century of farming and ranching operations in the area. However, Olin has borne the brunt of the blame for the situation. —QuicksilverT @ 19:03, 18 October 2008 (UTC)
Inappropriate Tone
editUser Burdlaw's edits from October 2010 are not neutral tone and present Olin's business and history in a negative manner. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 204.213.228.67 (talk) 03:20, 28 November 2010 (UTC) Those edits were updated and rephrased in October 2011.--Burdlaw (talk) 05:19, 25 October 2011 (UTC)
Wrong Logo
editThe logo linked to the article is actually the logo for a landscape architecture firm called OLIN, not Olin Corporation. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.185.79.156 (talk) 22:59, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
Edit Request
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NOTE: I am proposing this edit for FleishmanHillard on behalf of Olin Corporation. I am a paid editor and am aware of the COI guidelines. I am submitting this edit request to propose revisions and additions to the article in hopes of making the article more accurate and complete. The edits are as follows in the box, sorted by section:
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Thank you for your consideration! Alec Voss (talk) 20:56, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
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editBelow you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request. Spintendo 22:26, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
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Copyright cleanup
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Location
editOlin was established in East Alton illinois not new York. And it's current corporate offices are located in the state louis suburb or Clayton Missouri. 2600:6C42:7400:308B:9536:89D2:38A1:858C (talk) 22:48, 27 May 2022 (UTC)
Hazardous lead
editA recent edit from 2600:1008:b03c:4b61:8d4f:6aba:8cc6:92a (talk · contribs · WHOIS) shortened the lead of this article to only two sentences, removing a (sourced) summary of Olin Corporation's involvement in numerous chemical hazards. Given that this information has widespread coverage in the body of the article, I think that it deserves due weight in the lead as well. — Freoh 20:09, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
- I agree that incidents and hazards should be summarised in the lead (per MOS:LEAD). The wording in the removed text is possibly awkward:
Olin chemical plants frequently malfunction and pose a hazard to employees and nearby residents
. It would be better to make a statement of fact, such as, "Accidents at Olin chemical plants have exposed employees and nearby residents to health hazards." (Past tense). It's also a little difficult to quickly determine how many or what kind of accidents, because the article is poorly organised. For example, the paragraph:
The topic sentence of this paragraph makes me think it will be about a 2016 chlorine leak, but by the end of the paragraph we're talking about CEO succession in 2020. If the information were better organised, it would be easier to propose an even better summary for the lead (perhaps with more specific description of the exposures (ie, asbestos, chlorine leaks, superfund site, etc.) Larataguera (talk) 02:06, 14 April 2023 (UTC)In 2016, an Olin Corp. facility on Dow Chemical property in Plaquemine near Baton Rouge had a chlorine leak which led to the evacuation of the Dow plant. In 2016, Olin Corp, which was still based in Missouri, announced it was laying off 100 workers, or around 80% of the facility's workforce, at a factory north of downtown Henderson, also halting chlorine production at the site. It also stopped production of lye, with the facility to be remade into a bleach factory and distribution center for various industrial chemicals. Olin also scaled back chlorine production at other factories in New York and Texas. In 2019, Olin announced it was closing two plants in Texas by the end of 2020. It was reported in 2020 that Sachem Head Capital Management had built a stake in Olin Corporation at 9.4%. At that time, Olin remained headquartered in Clayton, Missouri and had 12 directors on its board. In 2020, Scott M. Sutton was selected by the Olin board to succeed Fischer as CEO and president, with Fischer becoming executive chairman.
- I agree that this article could use some significant reorganization. Given that they have released chlorine into the atmosphere three times in the last four years, I think that the present tense is appropriate,[1] but I have added your past tense version. — Freoh 20:44, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
- I also agree that present tense is appropriate, but I've learned that other editors probably don't. Thanks for replacing the information in the lead! Larataguera (talk) 21:15, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
- What is the rationale for why
other editors probably don't
? If it is just because the information could make the company look bad, then that sounds like an NPOV violation. If there is a local consensus among editors here that the present tense is appropriate, then I might change it. — Freoh 21:00, 16 April 2023 (UTC)- No, I don't think it's because it would make the company look bad. I think that a statement about present risk is inherently a little bit subjective. It's not possible to argue much about whether disasters have occurred in the past. It is possible to argue about whether these past disasters mean that a facility poses a risk in the present. I also haven't carefully reviewed the sources. Do the sources say there is a present risk? Because if they do, I think you have a very strong argument for stating a present risk. If they don't, I would just give specific details about past disasters. (For example, if there has been a leak three times in four years, say that – although if that was at a single facility you might not be able to generalise to all Olin facilities). Larataguera (talk) 22:36, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
- Okay, I think I might expand it a bit by mentioning their ongoing asbestos use. — Freoh 18:43, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
- That would be good. I think it's better to be more specific when possible. Another thing about past vs present tense: Even when something is ongoing, past tense can be better because it keeps the statement from going out of date. So "Olin facilities posed a health hazard in 2023" remains a true statement even if no one updates it. "Olin facilities currently pose a health hazard" could become untrue if the facility closes or something and no one updates the article. Larataguera (talk) 00:07, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
- I see your point, but where do you draw the line, exactly? If the company stopped manufacturing ammunition, then it would no longer be true that
Olin Corporation is an American manufacturer of ammunition
. I think that defaulting to the present tense makes sense in general, though I agree that my present tense hazard summary may have been a bit too broad. — Freoh 00:50, 20 April 2023 (UTC)- That's a good point. I guess it's a matter of how likely it is for the statement to become dated. And maybe it's relatively stable in this case.For me, the main consideration more generally is producing a resilient edit that won't need continual maintenance. Vague statements in the present tense seem more likely to be removed than specific statements about past events. (Although I think there's possibly some COI IP editing on this article, because specific statements about past accidents were also removed, but those statements were restored by an RC patroller). Larataguera (talk) 11:51, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
- I see your point, but where do you draw the line, exactly? If the company stopped manufacturing ammunition, then it would no longer be true that
- That would be good. I think it's better to be more specific when possible. Another thing about past vs present tense: Even when something is ongoing, past tense can be better because it keeps the statement from going out of date. So "Olin facilities posed a health hazard in 2023" remains a true statement even if no one updates it. "Olin facilities currently pose a health hazard" could become untrue if the facility closes or something and no one updates the article. Larataguera (talk) 00:07, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
- Okay, I think I might expand it a bit by mentioning their ongoing asbestos use. — Freoh 18:43, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
- No, I don't think it's because it would make the company look bad. I think that a statement about present risk is inherently a little bit subjective. It's not possible to argue much about whether disasters have occurred in the past. It is possible to argue about whether these past disasters mean that a facility poses a risk in the present. I also haven't carefully reviewed the sources. Do the sources say there is a present risk? Because if they do, I think you have a very strong argument for stating a present risk. If they don't, I would just give specific details about past disasters. (For example, if there has been a leak three times in four years, say that – although if that was at a single facility you might not be able to generalise to all Olin facilities). Larataguera (talk) 22:36, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
- What is the rationale for why
- I also agree that present tense is appropriate, but I've learned that other editors probably don't. Thanks for replacing the information in the lead! Larataguera (talk) 21:15, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
- I agree that this article could use some significant reorganization. Given that they have released chlorine into the atmosphere three times in the last four years, I think that the present tense is appropriate,[1] but I have added your past tense version. — Freoh 20:44, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
References
- ^ McGrory, Kathleen; Bedi, Neil (2022-12-07). "Workers Across America Break Their Silence on Decades of Asbestos Exposure". ProPublica. Retrieved 2023-04-15.