Talk:Okatoma Creek
Latest comment: 8 months ago by Thesparrow27 in topic Improving the article's tone
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Improving the article's tone
editWikipedia:Manual of Style should be consulted to improve the tone of this article. The major concerns are:
- It is like an advertisement with several peacock terms. It should be changed to be encyclopedic, stating factual information and letting the reader draw their own conclusions.
- Two web links are advertisements to rafting companies. They should be removed.
Another suggestion for improvement is to describe the physical characteristics of the creek. How long is it? Where is it located? Truthanado (talk) 02:21, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
I added citations to the existing article where possible, but I think it really needs a much more in-depth rewrite. A lot of the article still reads like an advertisement to tourists. Thesparrow27 (talk) 05:00, 19 February 2024 (UTC)