Talk:Octave Levenspiel

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Abdull in topic Diffusion machine

Review comments edit

Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

  • Template:Infobox Scientist should be added
  • Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
  • Needs copy edit and wikification
  • Article needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
  • Information on research should be expanded
  • After expansion, the main text should be divided into appropriate subheadings
  • References should be expanded and preferably converted to inline format with reference list (not external links)
  • Full details needed for books (eg publisher, date, coauthors, ISBN)
  • External links present which could be used to expand article

Espresso Addict 23:02, 13 July 2007 (UTC)Reply

Diffusion machine edit

What is a diffusion machine? Thanks, --Abdull (talk) 20:23, 25 November 2009 (UTC)Reply