Talk:Obsessed (1992 film)

Latest comment: 14 years ago by ADifferentMind in topic Plot summary

Plot summary

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The current plot summary is 1,388 words long. I know that the article is lacking in other information, but that's way too long, and there's information that simply isn't necessary. I'm going to edit it down to a more manageable size. ADifferentMind (talk) 15:27, 8 June 2010 (UTC)ADifferentMindReply

All right, it's down to 449 words, which is still a little long but better than before. I took out a lot of unnecessary info (Tina's relationship with Robert ultimately doesn't impact it) and tried to use less subjective words ("young hot cutie" probably isn't appropriate). ADifferentMind (talk) 16:20, 8 June 2010 (UTC)ADifferentMindReply