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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 14:05, 11 August 2013 (UTC)

Will review this tomorrow.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 19:03, 12 August 2013 (UTC)

Lead
  • aound -typo
  • "the tombs of Yax Nuun Ayiin I, Siyaj Chan K'awiil II, Wak Chan K'awiil and "Animal Skull"." dates of rule or burial in brackets after each would be useful here.
  • My feeling is that you need to elaborate more on the monuments to effectively summarize the article.
Late preclassic
  • Wikilink Late Preclassic .
Postclassic
  • Strange to begin section with "However".
Structures
  • No estimated dates for construction date of 27-31?
  • I've dropped in some dates; in some cases this is pretty vague since not all of these structures have been excavated. Simon Burchell (talk) 10:24, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
Burial 48
  • The king wwas -typo
plaster of paris

Paris is capitalized in the dictionary for plaster of Paris I believe.

Looks in good shape overall, most interesting, especially the red painted skull.♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:18, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

Many thanks for the review - I've fixed the simple stuff and will come back and do the rest tomorrow. Best regards, Simon Burchell (talk) 21:38, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
OK, I think I've dealt with everything - if not, please let me know. All the best, Simon Burchell (talk) 10:24, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


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  4. Is it neutral?
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  5. Is it stable?
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  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
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Good job!♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:27, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

That's great - many thanks! All the best, Simon Burchell (talk) 15:55, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
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