Talk:No Time for It/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Aoba47 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:01, 19 May 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
edit- According to the Side Effects of You article, the previous single was "Side Effects of You"; if this is true, please change "Without Me" to "Side Effects of You"
Lead
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edit- First single works, but you could also say "lead single" if you choose
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edit- How does this sound: "Commercially, the song peaked at number six on the United States Billboard Adult R&B Songs chart."
- Plus, remember to link Billboard in the above sentence, whatever you change about it
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edit- Looks good!
Background
edit- Nothing to change here :)
Composition and lyrical interpretation
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edit- Put "rock soul" in quotation marks like you did earlier
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edit- I don't think you need to link "chorus" here
- "as examples of how..." --> "are examples of how..."
- Remove the link to "Music Times"; the article for it was recently deleted
Release and acoustic version
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edit- Link The Definition Of..." please
- Add a semi-colon to the end of the sentence, then continue with "Fantasia wrote:..."
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edit- ¡Nada enchilada!
Reception
editCritical response
edit- In the first few reviews, the critics describe the song, but did they describe it favorably, negatively, were they mixed?, etc.
- The Omaha World-Herald review is a good example
- "; Smiley also said the singer was lacking..."
- "; Apaza further recommended that Fantasia..."
Commercial performance
edit- I know it only charted on one chart, but you could bring up how long it lasted, what week it peaked on, etc.
Formats and track listings
edit- Include the acoustic version here too
- This is a matter of my personal preference, but I would change the format of the downloads to the one used, for example, on "Make Me Like You", but it's up to you; I don't care regardless
Credits and personnel
edit- Any more personnel, like for tracking, mixing, recording, etc.?
- I would assume all the information about the personnel will be made available in the album's liner notes, which will be released with the album on July 29. I have added as much as I know for the time being. I am not sure how I could find the information for this prior to the album's release (I will definitely update this when it is released), but I am open to suggestion. Aoba47 (talk) 04:44, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
Release history
edit- Remove the links to the countries
End of GA Review:
editGood article; standard procedure – on hold for seven days. Good luck! Carbrera (talk) 02:58, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Carbrera: Thank you for the review. While this article is little, I am very proud of it as I did all the work for it so it means a lot to hear your feedback. I have addressed all your comments and added my own comments above. Let me know what you think about the "Personnel" part. Also, I have tried looking again to see if the acoustic version was released separately from the music video and still found nothing so I unfortunately cannot add anything else to the "Track listing" section. Let me know if there is anything else I can do. Thank you again (Sorry, I am very long-winded when typing lol). Aoba47 (talk) 04:44, 2 June 2016 (UTC)