Talk:Night of My Life (Barbra Streisand song)/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Aoba47 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 01:15, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
- Grabbing this for a review. I will get to it later in the week as I am a little burnt out on reviews at the moment, but ping me if I do not get to this by next Sunday. Aoba47 (talk) 01:15, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox
- I would use “11” rather than “eleven” in the part “first of eleven reunion”.
- Just a clarification question, but is this song also available as a digital download?
- I would clarify in the lead that the song was only praised by one music critic. After reading the “Reception” section, I could only see a positive review from individual. I would also clarify the negative review only came from one reviewer as well.
- I think that the phrase “a hit” may be too informal for Wikipedia.
- Background and release
- I would use Streisand’s full name and link her when you first mention her in the body of the article.
- I would use “11” rather than “eleven”.
- Composition and lyrics
- AllMusic needs to be in italics.
- Reception
- I think you can just say Stephen Thomas Erlewine without mentioning his affiliation again as you have already introduced him in a previous section.
- Final thoughts
- Once all of my comments are addressed, I will pass this as a GA. Good work with this. My suggestions are very minor and nitpicky as there is not much that requires improvement. If possible, I would greatly appreciate it if you could pick up one of my GANs for review. Either way, have a great day. Aoba47 (talk) 14:45, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
- Aoba47 – I addressed your concerns. Thank you very much. Lemme know if you need help with anything in the future. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 19:27, 15 January 2018 (UTC).
- I am glad that I could help. I would greatly appreciate it if you could pick up one of my GANs for review. Either way, have a wonderful rest of your day! Aoba47 (talk) 19:30, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
- Aoba47 – I addressed your concerns. Thank you very much. Lemme know if you need help with anything in the future. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 19:27, 15 January 2018 (UTC).
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