Talk:Nafir

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Jacqke in topic Refimprove

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Onel5969 (talk · contribs): I appreciate your looking over this article. While I didn't write it, I worked on importing it. In the process I had to look at the sources, which are reliable. Did you have any particular parts of the article to improve? Best WishesJacqke (talk) 19:53, 29 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hi. While it is very well cited already, there are still quite a few assertions in the article which are not cited. For example, the instruments found in Tutankhamen's tomb, or the German word for fanfare, or "The orchestras named after the kettle drum naqqāra...", or "Numerous other regional names...". Those are just several of the examples. It's not many, in relation to what's already in the article, but there are at least a dozen or so throughout the article. They should either be footnoted, or removed from the article. Feel free to ping me after you've edited and I'll take another look. Onel5969 TT me 20:04, 29 December 2022 (UTC)Reply
Those are good observations. I'll work on them. Thank you! Jacqke (talk) 20:07, 29 December 2022 (UTC)Reply