Talk:My Boxer/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 20:26, 21 February 2017 (UTC)
Lead
edit- Release year in brackets for "Wish Bone"
- Robyn, Santigold, and Gwen Stefani → no comma before "and"
- was released on 12 July → you should mention that it was released on 12 July 2013
Infobox
edit- flawless ;)
Background and composition
edit- through the help of Spin → how did they help her?
- While creating music for Oh Land's third record, Wish Bone (2013), she wanted → While creating music for her third record, Wish Bone (2013), Oh Land wanted
- that has duration → that has a duration
Critical reception
edit- Paul MacInnes acclaimed the song → "applauded" is better to use here
Music video
edit- The official music video for → Better: An accompanying music video for
Other stuff
editCopy-violation
edit- 43.5% is too much! Please look at the first source and try to reword it.
Links
editReferences
edit- As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
- No dead links! Good job!
Outcome
editBrilliant article! 
On hold for 7 days! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: Thank you. I have addressed all of your concerns. If you take a look at the copyvio template, you will notice it is such a high number only because the block quote in the article is from that website. That shouldn't be a problem; block quotes are used all of the time. Please let me know if anything else should be done. Thank you, Carbrera (talk) 00:03, 3 March 2017 (UTC).
- Gladly passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 05:19, 3 March 2017 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.