Talk:My Baby Is Missing

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Royalcourtier in topic Plot needs work

Plot needs work

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The plot summary is incomplete and vague. Who is "Lynn Mallory", a nurse or doctor, or a friend? Who is Madeline - is that the name of the baby, whose sex is not known? Why did the father not know the woman was heavily pregnant? The scenario itself does not make sense. If there had been a miscarriage the baby might be cremated without the parents consent. But this was a full term baby, so it would be a still birth, not a miscarriage. The child would be given to the parents to bury.Royalcourtier (talk) 23:14, 8 February 2014 (UTC)Reply