Talk:Motorbase Performance

Latest comment: 3 years ago by AppleBsTime in topic Tone of this article
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Tone of this article

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The tone of this article is a little too "enthusiastic". Example:

Harvey would later claim an outstanding victory for the team in the GB element of the Porsche Carrera World Cup race, racing against over 100 911 GT3 Cup cars from the worldwide Carrera Cup series racing on the daunting 14 mile world famous Nurburgring Nordschleife in Germany.

If anyone else agrees, please comment here, and maybe I will take a crack at modifying the prose. - AppleBsTime (talk) 20:14, 16 September 2020 (UTC)Reply