Talk:Moral Equivalent of War speech
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I created this because the speech was much more notable than A New Beginning and Wikipedia really needed this one. President of Chicago (talk) 05:14, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
Good information, but it needs some work edit
The formatting needs to be changed so that references are at the bottom. It needs external links to be moved to their own section. Also, a lot of the information appears redundant. Do we really need the whole speech up here, when there is an external link to the transcription, and a list of points made in the speech? Some clarifying is needed, while I was reading through the points they were written in the first person, which was a bit confusing. There were a couple of sentences that ended in the middle of the sentence and the next sentence began without and punctuation or spacing. The information was good, but it needs some editing!
- It seems like the text of the speech itself should be a wikisource.--Fabrictramp | talk to me 23:03, 19 October 2009 (UTC)
Video source edit
Does video of this not exist or something?122.102.238.156 (talk) 16:54, 30 March 2010 (UTC)