Talk:Mit Fried und Freud ich fahr dahin, BWV 125/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:35, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

Taking this one as well. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 09:35, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• Can movement, horn, flauto traverso, oboe, oboe d'amore, and basso continuo be linked?

movement linked, - for the others, follow Baroque instruments --GA

• "chorale fantasia" is linked twice

good catch --GA

• Do we need the second citation here? It does not seem necessary.

cite all quotations in the lead --GA

History and words

• You may wish to repeat some of the links of the lead in the main article.

you wish, I tried ;) --GA

• You need to place a proper citation at the end of the first para.

sorry, forgot to double when para was split --GA

• What is a canticle?

it's linked --GA

• "one more time" could be reworded as "once more", more compact.

thank you --GA

Music

• "Keys" is a duplicate link. You may keep it if it is necessary.

delinked --GA

• In "4" is "m" in the end of time after time.)"m a typo?

seems corrected --GA

Rest looks good. These addressed, I would be happy to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 08:39, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for good comments! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:00, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

Such a work shouldn't have to wait any longer. This is promoted. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:56, 2 May 2016 (UTC)

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